Some of my best work.... My reply is below her initial email.
From: csloan [mailto:]
Sent: Wednesday, January 24, 2007 12:45 PM
To: Ricky Borba
Subject: regarding my application My name is Christine Sloan and I filled out an application to start my own Pump It Up. Unfortunately before I was finished completing my application it got submitted. I am very interested in exploring this opportunity. My son and I went to a birthday party at the Pump It Up in Peabody,Ma and found it to be an excellent experience. We are having a birthday party for him there this Saturday Jan 27. Pump it Up is an excellent place to have a childs party or even a team building event. I am very interested and excited to help this concept grow in Massachusetts and in New England. Thank you. Sincerly, Christine Sloan
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Hi Christine, While it's too late to you pull your application out of the "people that have no business owning a Pump It Up because they can't even complete the application" file, (I know, it's a long file name, but that file is HUGE) you can just start over again and resubmit a new one. And please note, you're jumping the gun waaaaaaaaaaaaaay too early with the brown nosing. You won't have to say things like "pump it up is an excellent place to have a childs party or team building event and I'm very interested, etc" until you start talking to Marla about UFOC's and things like that. Have a super great day. I've eaten a lot of sugar recently. I'll probably be napping in about 30 minutes. ___________________________
Ricky Borba
IT/Help Desk & Sales
PIU Management, LLC
PH: 925-397-1300
FAX: 925-600-0279
PIU Help Line 925-397-1395
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